历年考研英语作文真题及范文（1994年）

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Section V Writing

Directions:

[A] Title: ON MAKING FRIENDS

[B] Time limit: 40 minutes

[C] Word limit: 120-150 words (not including the given opening sentence)

[D] Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the given opening sentence: “As a human being, one can hardly do without a friend.”

[E] Your composition must be written clearly on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

OUTLINE:

1. The need for friends

2. True friendship

3. My principle in making friends

【审题解题】

这篇文章的结构是较为复杂的，包含了三个相对独立的部分。第一段是写人们需要朋友的原因——可从两个方面来写。第二段是写什么是真正的友谊，可从三个方面来写。第三段是写自己在交友之中的原则，可从两个方面来写。

【核心词汇】

as to 至于，关于

to get / form / build and maintain friendship 得到/形成/建立/建立和保持友谊

lasting / enduring friendship 持久的友谊

honest and conscientious friends 诚实和勤劳尽责的朋友

true / genuine friends 真正的朋友

tolerance and forgiveness 忍耐和宽容

【参考范文】 On Making Friends

As a human being, one can hardly do without a friend. Living in the society, only when a person has friends can he live a happy and colorful life. What’s more, in this modern society where communication becomes so important, one’s ability to form and maintain lasting friendship has been regarded as a necessity for a successful career.

As to what true friendship means, my opinion is as follows. First of all, true friendship originates from sincerity of both parts, and only sincere friends will give us a hand when we are in need of help. Second, no matter whether they are similar or different, genuine friends should be able to get along, share experiences and exchange ideas with each other. Last but by no means the least, since no one is perfect, we should learn tolerance and forgiveness, which are essential to an enduring friendship.

As far as I an concerned, my principle in making friends is that friends can be few but must be well chosen. In the first place, I would like to make friends with those who are honest and conscientious. In the second place, once the selection is made, I will trust him and offer him help whenever need arises.

【黄金模板】

As a human being, one can hardly do without… Living in the society, only when a person… what’s more…

As to what… means, my opinion is as follows. First of all… Second… Last but by no means the least…

As far as I am concerned, my principle/view… is that… In the first place, … In the second place, …

【结构点评】

第一段和第三段都分两个方面来写。第一段的第一点没有使用连接词，这时第二点前的连接词就要有所选择，可能用what’s more, moreover, furthermore等等。第三段的两点前都使用了连接词，这是就应与三点或三点以上的段落有所区分。大家看到，首段与末段在这里使用了不同的方法，显得相得益彰。

第二段分三个方面来说，应注意连接词的配套使用——这里是从最重要的说到最不重要的，所以分别使用了first of all, second, last but by no means the least。

【妙笔生花】

第一段的第二句使用了现在分词短语作状语，之后使用了only开头的倒装句，突出了朋友的重要性而后有形容词平行的用法。第三句中的介词短语作状语非常值得学习，这里关系副词where引导的定语从句使其结构简单之中又富于变化，具有很强的表意功能。之后的form and maintain lasting friendship表示“建立和保持长久的友谊”，form亦可用get或build代替;be regarded as表示“被认为是…”，此处动词亦可用consider;其后的a necessity for a successful career非常精彩，请大家学习，其中a necessity比necessary 要好，请大家品味，万里for a successful career意义凝冻。

第二段分三点说，每一点各有一句话。第一点中的originate from表示“源于”，而后有sincerity和sincere的连续使用;而后的give sb. a hand和in need of help分别表示“帮助某人”和“需要帮助”，意义恰合。第二点中的similar和different指的是两种朋友——相似的和不同的，而后的genuine呼应了上文的true，用来修饰friend或friendship;之后的动词词组的平行使用。第三点中先说“没有人是完美的”，之后说我们应学会容忍(tolerance)和宽恕(forgiveness)，而这对于持久的友谊是至关重要的(essential)，其中enduring等于上文的lasting。

第三段的首句是模仿Samuel Paterson名句：Books, like friends, should be few and well chosen。而后分两点来说。第一点中使用了形容词的平行，conscientious表示“按良心办事的”。第二点中使用one the selection is made这样的一个时间状语从句，时间的错落感就体现出来了，其后有个很好的时间状语从句whenever need arises，表示“每当有需要的时候。

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