2017考研英语作文短文写作解析及范文之家庭健康类(2)

　　身体健康类

　　Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should: 1) describe the drawing briefly,

　　explain its intended meaning, and then 3) state your point of view.

　　You should write on ANSWER SHEET 2.

　　知识分子健康差寿命短

　　范文：

　　The picture depicts a typical Chinese scholar who keeps working late at night, while the presence of his wife and child behind clearly indicates the man‘s pressure of supporting a whole family. What is strikingly noticeable is the scholar‘s exceptional skinniness, but it can be easily explained by the simple food, bottles of medicine, and poor working environment shown in the picture.

　　The discernable unhealthiness of this hard-working scholar discloses a prevalent phenomenon

　　that has long existed in China‘s academia. Intellectuals are not highly respected and they enjoy unsatisfactory material benefits with particularly unattractive salaries due to low social position. In addition, family, social, and academic stresses are so immensely exerted on intellectuals that they are forced to work diligently and ceaselessly. As a result, the integration of poor living conditions and work pressure leads naturally to their poor health and short life-span, just as the picture shows us.

　　The situation is rather depressing because intellectuals in fact contribute greatly to our country‘s development, and it is largely owing to their painstaking efforts that pave the way for advancement and prosperity. To solve this problem, I think there should be a thriving social trend of showing respect to knowledge and intellects, and those who endeavor to explore new knowledge should be rewarded with good living and working conditions.

　　译文：

　　这幅图刻画了一个典型的中国知识分子的形象，他一直工作到深夜，背后的妻子和孩子显示了他有着很大的养家的压力。值得我们注意的是这个学者格外削瘦，但这很容易通过图中简单的食物、药罐以及较差的工作环境得到解释。

　　这个勤奋学者的不健康状况显示出中国学术界一个长期存在的现象。一方面，知识分子没有受到尊重，他们享受的物质条件也非常差，尤其是由于他们的社会地位很低，他们的工资也相应地非常少。另一方面，知识分子们承担着巨大的家庭、社会和学术压力，导致他们被迫非常勤奋地不停地工作。因此，恶劣的生活条件和巨大的工作压力自然导致他们较差的健康和较短的寿命，正如图中告诉我们的那样。 这种情况非常令人失望，因为知识分子实际上对我们国家的发展做出了巨大的贡献，而且正是因为他们的不懈努力引向了我国的发达和繁荣。为了解决这个问题，我认为全社会要掀起尊重知识、尊重知识分子的高潮，而那些辛勤地探索新知识的人们应该得到较好的工作和生活环境等回报。

　　闪光词汇及词组：

　　exceptional: adj. 例外的，特别的 skinniness: n. 消瘦

　　discernable: adj. 可观察到的，可辨别的 disclose: v. 揭露，透露

　　prevalent: n. 普遍的，流行的 academia: n. 学术界

　　immensely: adv. 非常，广大的，巨大的 diligently: adv 勤勉地 life-span: n. 寿命

　　painstaking: adj. 努力的

　　pave the way to: 为„„铺平道路，为„„做好准备 endeavor: v. 努力，尽力

　　万能句型：

　　The picture depicts…

　　What is strikingly noticeable is…

　　The situation is rather depressing because…

　　To solve the problem, I think there should be… … it is largely owing to…
 

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