2014考研英语二小作文高分范文及批改：投诉信1_跨考网

　　考研英语待批改作文：

　　8-10分

　　第一篇

　　Dear Sir or Madam ，

　　I am a loyal customer of your company for years. I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about the microwave oven bought in your ship-flag shop last week.

　　The reason for my dissatisfaction is the poor quality of commodity and service. In the first place，the chief switch didn't work after I used it once, which I make sure the electric circuit must be burnt down. In addition，promising to replace a new one, though, neither service office nor repair team ever contacted me. Under these circumstances， I find it quite annoyed to cook dishes during meal time.

　　I appreciate it very much if you could repair the broken part, preferably change a quality conformance one, and I would like to have this matter settled by the end of this week.

　　Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours sincerely

　　Li Ming

　　考研英语作文批改点评如下：

　　Dear Sir or Madam ，

　　I am a loyal customer of your company for years. I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about the microwave oven bought in your ship-flag shop last week.

　　The reason for my dissatisfaction is the poor quality of commodity and service. In the first place，the chief switch didn't work after I used it once, which I make(改为am) sure the electric circuit must be burnt down. In addition，promising to replace a new one, though, neither service office nor repair team ever contacted me. Under these circumstances， I find it quite annoyed to cook dishes during meal time.

　　I appreciate it very much if you could repair the broken part, preferably change a quality conformance one, and I would like to have this matter settled by the end of this week.

　　Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours sincerely

　　Li Ming

　　9分

　　作文写的很好，再注意一下小的细节

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