2014考研英语：如何增加作文的闪光点_跨考网

　　作文是考研英语中得分较低的一种题型，究其原因，除了平时缺少练习之外，同学们还缺乏作文抓分技巧。同学们需要掌握一定的作文模板，除此之外，如果能在作文中设置一些词汇和句型的闪光点，必定使你的作文如虎添翼。

　　高分作文标志：

　　1、是否长短句交叉;2、是否会使用插入语;3、用词是否多样、准确、形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词;5、句型使用是否准确、地道。

　　下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：

　　1.适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观地反映事实。句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. )举个经典结尾的例子：It is ，therefore， high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.

　　2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作为插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。如however / therefore /for example/I believe做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词、助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。举例如下：Other individuals， however， take the attitude that…

　　3.一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good， bad ， many， thing， think， people， opinion等等)比如第一条的例子中，applicable替换proper; approaches替换ways; implement替换carry out; sharpen one‘s competitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)。

　　下面举一篇某位同学写的优秀作文的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法，精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。

　　I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present， which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that I indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ，and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless， feeling that the whole world belonged to me.

　　exceedingly替换very;(个人认为替换成overwhelmingly更出彩)

　　thrilling替换exciting;

　　sth. exerts a tremendous fascination on sb替换sb. be interested in sth;

　　google替换search;

　　an army of替换a lot of.

　　The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology， computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them， in large measure!

　　The dawn of the new century witnessed是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情;

　　Increasing popularity替换more and more popular;

　　Coincident with…非常地道的句型，表达“与…一致”的意思，替换With…;

　　Advancement替换development;

　　Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换enter into;

　　Current ( currently )替换now;