2011年考研真题英语(一)作文解析_跨考网

　　Section III Writing

　　51.小作文

　　小作文范文：

　　Dear friend,

　　I am writing, without hesitation, to share one of my favorite movies, Forest Gump, with you, which is not only conducive to your study, but also beneficial to your life.

　　For one thing, the beautiful language in this original English movie may contribute to your study of English in listening, speaking, reading and writing. For another thing, the profound cultural elements implicit in the scene will equip you with foreign cultural background and, above all, enrich your daily life.

　　Would you like to see this movie after my recommendation? Remember to tell me your opinion about the movie. I am looking forward to your early reply.

　　Yours,

　　Li Ming

　　审题谋篇

　　11年应用文写作考查的是推荐信。推荐信是向收信人推荐某人做某事的信件。

　　本次的推荐信是推荐给好友一部电影，并说明喜欢这部电影的原因。题目中给出的信息包括：写信的对象(a friend)，写信的目的(recommend one of your favorite movies)，信的主体内容(reasons for your recommendation)。需要注意的是主体部分至少包括两方面的原因。

　　文章从布局上可以分为三段展开。第一段，直接点明主题，开门见山地说出写信意图，可以笼统地向朋友推荐你喜欢的电影。第二段则要发挥想象力，从2~3个方面点出你之所以推荐这部电影的原因。在写第二段时，一定要打开思路，可写的素材多种多样，如笼统地说明该电影语言优美，有助于英语学习;同时电影中隐含的文化要素能够丰富我们的日常生活。第三段，再次推荐，并盼望回复。

　　从语域角度讲，这是一篇给亲密朋友的推荐信，因此用词可较为随和，但语气要真挚，以达到和朋友沟通和交流的作用。

　　作文的评分要点包括：1)题目所给的信息点的全面性;2)内容组织的条理性和语言的准确性;3)根据交际对象采用的话语方式，如正式、一般、非正式的话语等。这封信是写给朋友的，谈论的是推荐自己喜欢的电影，因此语气较非正式，随和且真挚;4)标点、拼写和书写格式要正确，如果影响交际，产生歧义或令人费解，分数将降低一个档次。

　　写作技巧

　　清晰的三段式层次，合情合理，语言要直接，态度真诚，语气随和。

　　第一段，点明写信的目的是推荐电影。信函开头的可套用句型为：

　　I am writing to you to recommend … for …

　　I take great pleasure in recommending to you … as …

　　I would like to present … for your consideration in …

　　With reference to your requirements, I shall, without reservation, recommend … as….

　　第二段，简要概括推荐该电影的原因。

　　On the one hand,…On the other hand,…从两个角度提出……;

　　第三段，再次建议，并盼望回复。可套用句型：

　　I am convinced that you are willing to see this movie after my enthusiastic recommendation.

　　Your prompt attention on my recommendations will be highly appreciated.

　　52.大作文

　　大作文范文：

　　The terrible scene depicted in the cartoon shows that some people in our life still lack the awareness of environmental protection. The picture illustrates that two tourists are chatting and eating happily on a boat and casually throwing their rubbish into the lake which is full of litter and waste. The drawing sets us thinking too much due to its far-reaching influence.

　　Nowadays, though the awareness of protecting environment is being accepted by more and more people, we can still see many unpleasant scenes especially in scenic spots. Why does this phenomenon arise? Many factors are accounting for it. First and foremost, to some people, the consciousness of protecting environment is still not so strong. They may not think it is a big deal to throw rubbish everywhere. In addition, the environmental management system isn’t so satisfying. For example, in some places there’re few regulations or the implementation is seldom performed actually.

　　From what has been discussed above, it is urgent to take some effective and relative measures. In the first place, we should continue to conduct more propaganda in communities and schools so as to let people realize the importance of protecting environment. In the second, more rules should be made and carried out by the government to restrain the conduction of destroying environment. People should work together to create clean and beautiful surroundings.

　　审题谋篇

　　本次大作文话题为大家一直计较关注的环保问题。环境话题在1991年、1999年以及2000年都曾经考过，所以对各位考生来讲并不陌生。而且2010年考查的“文化”与2002年考查的话题一致，因此，话题复现是很自然的。这同时也告诉未来考生复习往年话题的重要性。

　　文章采取总分总结构。第一段描述图画，描述的内容一定要与主题相关。第一句可以总写图画，也可以先点明文章观点。接着，第二/三句具体描写图画内容。最后一句再次点题。第二段揭示产生问题的原因。可以列举2-3个理由。或者写此问题可能导致的结果。最后一段提出解决问题的方案或者措施。

　　写作技巧

　　The terrible scene depicted in the cartoon shows that…

　　The drawing sets us thinking too much due to …

　　Many factors are accounting for …